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Jane Austen gets the Raymond Carver treatment?
Interesting news from the Telegraph: “Jane Austen’s famous prose may not be hers after all.”
Prof Kathryn Sutherland said analysis of Austen’s handwritten letters and manuscripts reveal that her finished novels owed as much to the intervention of her editor as to the genius of the author.
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“The reputation of no other English novelist rests so firmly on the issue of style, on the poise and emphasis of sentence and phrase, captured in precisely weighed punctuation. But in reading the manuscripts it quickly becomes clear that this delicate precision is missing.
“This suggests somebody else was heavily involved in the editing process between manuscript and printed book,” Prof Sutherland said.
Prof. Sutherland proposes that one William Gifford was this very editor, Austen’s own Gordon Lish.
At The Missouri Review, we take literary editing very seriously, and our senior staff have many personal anecdotes of the very forms of magic they’ve seen editors work that transform good stories into great stories. But our conception of authorship still looks askance at the editor. I had a writing professor who was became nearly to apoplectic when describing how he felt Gordon Lish had exerted his editorial tyranny over Raymond Carver — and it is hard not to feel a stab of pain when one reads of Carver’s plea to Lish to stop cutting his drafts by as much as 70%. As yet, it doesn’t appear that Austen’s relationship with Gifford was anything near as fraught, but I expect idea of Gifford’s possible role in shaping the “voice” of Austen is deeply troubling to many Austen fans.
So what do you think about authors and editors? Is an author diminished by being the recipient of an editor’s polishing blue pencil? Are editors the writer’s friend or foe?
Medium and Message
Another interesting posting on e-books floated to the top of the Google News filter recently. Andres Oppenheimer of the Miami Herald interviewed Nobel Prize Winner Mario Vargas Llosa concerning the future of literature in an age of e-books. After commenting on the portability benefits of e-books, Vargas Llosa sounds a cautionary note:
But, on the down side, “it could bring along an impoverishment of literary quality,” he said.
“There is always the risk that literature that is written for the screen will be more prone to triviality, banality, to a deterioration of intellectual activity.”
We hear a lot of such talk about “new media” these days, how e-books will change literature, how blogs are changing journalism.
But, really, why should the medium change the message? Why do so many seem so convinced that a writer producing a work that will be read on a screen write in a different way than a writer who expects to see his or her words on the printed page? No doubt there will be further experiments utilizing the unique properties of digital distribution to create more multimedia “hypertext” literature (are we even using that term anymore? The “hypertext” novel already seems passé, obsolete before it even got its natural platform). But lots of novels — most novels, even — will continue to be plain text. Why should the means of displaying that text seem so crucial?
Certainly, there is a McLuhanistic argument for how the specific qualities of a medium shape our perceptions of content, and there are perhaps compelling hypotheses for why digital consumption can somehow devalue the content (of course, similar arguments were made when the printing press replaced hand-crafted manuscripts, some of which would cast the modern binding-sniffing bibliophile as a downright philistine).
However, it seems to me that the more significant force affecting artistic quality is not the development of a new medium, but that of a new market. E-books appear to be opening up a new market for a kind of reading. Maybe that market wants more ephemeral and superficial content (and then again, maybe it doesn’t). But is this destructive of the market for quality? Vargas Llosa goes on in his remarks to compare e-books to television, saying:
“Television is, on one hand, an extraordinary source of information. But in general, the products created for television are very trivial, banal, compared to creative products that end up in books.”
Anyone who has been watching HBO’s original programming for the last decade (to name just one example) can dispute this statement. If much of what is produced for television is banal, is that a fault of the medium, or is it simply a response to the largest market? I think it’s been amply proven that there’s no limitation on aesthetic and intellectual quality to the television format. It just happens that television is also the principle vehicle for serving a mass audience that also wants its daily escapist fare.
Moreover, if you really crunch the numbers, I suspect the number of trivial and banal books published every year utterly dwarfs offerings of high-quality literature. Indeed, it may well be true that, per capita, television has a higher ratio of high-quality art to schlock than book publishing does. (Even if there are several hundred bad TV series for every The Wire, there have to be many thousands of bad books for every masterpiece.)
There might well be a digital market for banal content, for which many terabytes of bad writing will be produced. But it is not the digital screen that leads people to write badly.
The optimistic argument (often trotted out by new media revolutionaries) is that the opening up of any new market, even a market for crap, produces spill-over for older kinds of content. Buyers of e-books (like buyers of digital music) may not be more inclined to start buying more paper books or compact discs, but they are likely to buy books and recordings in their general sense. Quality will find its audience even across changes of media or distribution platform, and vice versa.
The Role of Literary Publishers in the Digital Age
The Wall Street Journal has recently published an interesting if somewhat conventionally hand-wringing article on the economic impact on authors of the burgeoning digital publishing business model and the accompanying decline of print publishing: “Authors Feel Pinch in Age of E-Books.” The article is noteworthy of seriously considering the impact on writers of literary fiction, since it seems from my reading that a lot of the ink spilled over the economics of e-books tends to be about how it’s changing the dynamics of mass-market publishing.
But I thought I’d mention this article as a springboard for talking about two things not particularly addressed by it: the stigma of self-publishing and the future of short fiction publishing.
On the first point: it seems inevitable that digital self-publishing is going to be a more and more attractive and even sensible route for authors. There are certainly benefits that conventional publishers offer, such as the input of experienced editors and the skills of professional marketers (neither of which, however, is actually intrinsic to the act of producing a physical or digital edition). But as publishing houses seem to invest less and less in providing precisely these services for authors — particularly literary authors (and I’ve known several who have hired their own P.R. person because their publishers were doing inadequate jobs) — does it still make sense to let a publisher collect 75% of your e-book’s revenue just for the service of typesetting it and uploading it to Amazon’s Kindle store, when both of these tasks are things authors are generally capable of doing adequately on their own? (Professional typesetting is not to be underrated, but one could hire a graphic designer to do layouts for a one-time fee — and even then, depending on the e-book format, many of the benefits of professional design might be lost anyway, if the e-book reader isn’t displaying a straight PDF but rather rendering its own version of a glorified text file.) It seems to me that would-be mass-market or even niche-marker “genre” writers have a tendency to be fairly enthusiastic about such prospects: many of them are already accustomed to actively participating in niche fandoms and writing communities. They have a fairly strong conception of who their audience is and how to reach them, and the idea of directly and independently marketing their work to that audience is entrepreneurial and exciting. And there’s something appealing in the Protestant-work-ethicality of feeling that you have personal responsibility for your book’s success or failure, rather than being stuck waiting for editorial approval and endorsement from on high.
Therein, of course, lies the rub for many literary writers, whose practical income is based on academic positions or the ability to get prestige-based grants for their work. In institutionalized art (especially academia), we have not yet adapted our standards for success to encompass publication outside of conventional print entities, or online entities that closely ape print. We tend to live by the polite fiction that literary journal editors or publishing houses selecting a story or novel is equivalent to academic peer-review publication. But the current upheaval in the publishing industry shows how much it is a raw marketplace, where success is driven by market forces over any abstract measures of “quality.” Defining literary quality is itself highly problematic, but a quick survey of authors employed in higher education suggests that it’s not particularly based on straightforward market success. The assumption seems to be that we let literary editors determine merit for us by means of what they select to sell to an audience. The rationale remains fundamentally commercial, but we like to pretend it’s more high-minded than that. We trust in editors as gatekeepers, and have not developed good mechanisms for assigning value to works that are read and enjoyed without the imprint of a publisher. Does a print chapbook that has 500 copies printed and some fraction of that actually sold really have greater value than a collection distributed by the author freely (or cheaply) online that receives several thousand pageviews? Do we really only trust professional publishers (who are in a collapsing industry) to verify for us what has value? Will we be able to accept positive reviews from venerable institutions as evidence of merit for self-published work (assuming reviewers will elect to read self-published work) rather than relying on the fact that a publisher was willing to put a financial stake in releasing an author’s work through a distribution channel that no longer has a material rationale for keeping access to it limited?
I don’t propose that these are rhetorical questions. Indeed, I think that they are highly problematic. But I can admit my own personal anxiety at the prospect of having written a novel that I think is good, that I want to share, but not being able do anything with it until someone with privileged access to the means of production/distribution decides that they’re willing to risk an investment in that work, when, in fact, the means of production/distribution is right at my fingertips at any time. Of course, nothing is stopping me from self-publishing, other than the fact that if I would like patronage for my work through the auspices of an academic job, I have to have “real” publications on my C.V.
And this brings me to the question of short fiction, which is particularly interesting, because the electronic marketplace for it is still relatively underdeveloped (probably because the actual audience for short fiction is far from a significant commercial or cultural force). If we can envision a form of digital authorship that has been liberated from a reliance on “publishers” to make their work available, what then becomes of the literary magazine? If I don’t need your magazine to make my story physically available to readers, and if (eventually) I don’t necessarily need your magazine’s imprint to prove my artistic credibility, then what role does the idea of a magazine have?
My suggestion would be that we do still need gatekeepers, that we do need institutional organs that recognize merit and bestow prestige — but that these organs no longer need to be in the business of publishing the work they praise. I can see a future for literary magazines that much more closely resembles their past — as venues for review and criticism, as institutions that promote and recognize artistic achievement without having to be the means of accessing that achievement. This is, essentially, the role that film and music magazines, for example, already occupy. In some ways, I wonder if the general decline in the cultural significance of short fiction in particular might be related to the fact that most journals today present work to the public as though merely being in their magazine is testament enough to its merits. Does merely appearing in your magazine really do all that much to make a case for an author’s work to the reading public? I think lots of readers (and even writers) ask “Why should I subscribe to a literary journal?” (my writing students certainly ask this), and I’m not convinced that the journals have made a very good case for themselves — too often they assume the work makes its own case, and I think the market trends show that to be a flawed assumption. As more journals look for content to fill-out their online presence, we can already see a tendency to produce more and more commentary, in the form of podcasts and blog post pitches and author interviews/prefaces. It seems to me a natural further progression to drop the need of being the sole (initial) distributor of a work, and making the promotion of good work that is already out there, released by the author, the institutional function of a review. After all, isn’t that really all a slush-pile is, anyway, except that when we choose to publish something out of the slush-pile, far too often we don’t even bother to share with our reading public why we thought it was worthy of their interest and attention?
Online submissions restored!
Our submissions system is now fully operational again! If you paid for a submission from Saturday evening through Tuesday morning and were unable to complete the upload, first try clicking the link in your receipt e-mail again and see if the upload page loads for you. If it does, you can continue to submit normally. If not, please contact us at mutmrquestion@missouri.edu, and we’ll arrange to receive and process your file.
Thanks for you patience,
Patrick Lane
TMR Web Editor
Submission Errors — Being Addressed!
Over the weekend, the University’s IT staff encountered some problems while migrating our site (and many others) to a new server environment. At the moment (Monday afternoon), we have our webpages back up, but the submission system is still experiencing errors.
If you submitted a payment for either an online contest or regular submission but were unable to complete the upload process, please bear with us. As soon as the server has been properly reconfigured, the upload link you were sent in your submission receipt should still work. If it doesn’t, you can contact us at mutmrquestion@missouri.edu and let us know that your submission was affected, and we’ll arrange to properly receive and process your submission. Please include in your e-mail the name that appears on your credit card so that we can match you up to one of the processed payments.
We’ll update here to let you know as soon as the submission system is fully functioning again.
Thanks for you patience!
Patrick Lane
TMR Web Editor







600,000 Characters in Search of an Audience
GalleyCat reports that 45,000 kids between the ages of 5 and 17 are signed up this year as participants in National Novel Writing Month. I’ve started several times over the past two weeks to write something about NaNoWriMo, but always stopped because A) there has been so much polemical discussion of NaNoWriMo in the blogosphere this month that there seems to be little more to add to the discussion, and B) I don’t really know what I think about NaNoWriMo. I find myself vacillating wildly between positive and negative responses. At this point, I would tentatively say that I think NaNoWriMo probably does have a positive effect at the level of individual participation (that it is a “good” experience for people to have), but that as a collective force and (nascent) institution it does indeed project some problematic and troubling values concerning the nature and function of art.
But rather than rehashing what some of those questionable values are — which has been done many times elsewhere, most especially in Laura Miller’s controversial piece — I want to look briefly at the question of audience, which GalleyCat’s statistic put me in mind of. Miller asked who’s going to read all these novels, and a lot of the negative response to her has replied “Who cares?” You write your novel for yourself, the argument goes, and participation in NaNoWriMo is essentially an exercise in self-esteem building and personal achievement. This, one could argue, makes the act of writing not about “art,” per se, but about accomplishment, which is similar to how the fad of marathon-running has made those events no so much about athleticism but about ticking off personal checkboxes. And, of course, whenever someone argues that whenever the seriousness of an endeavor has been diluted by the mass participation of “tourists,” cries of elitism are sure to follow (and I use the word “tourist” quite deliberately here — the problem is not amateurs vs. professionals; it’s people who take the art/sport/hobby seriously for its own sake vs. those who only want to fulfill short-term, personal goals, or those interested in advancing the state of the field [and, as it were, being resident in that field] vs. those who just want a diversion from the mainline of their lives [who want to visit, but aren't really interested in risking or investing anything in it]).
All of this is merely a long-winded way of saying that if your answer to “Who’s going to read all this work” is “Who cares,” then that is, at heart, a denial of the communicative purpose of art (which is one of the troubling values associated with NaNoWriMo). But this, too, is not really what I want to talk about. I think it’s rather easy for many of us who think of ourselves as serious writers to slip into that “Who cares?” mindset just because getting an audience is so hard. The more you begin to feel like nobody out there wants to read your work, the more tempting it becomes to dismiss with a contemptuous wave of the hand the whole idea of seeking out an audience. If I can’t really see a “them” for me to write to (or for), then maybe I am better off thinking that I’m writing just for “me.” [A variant on this is the feeling that one is only writing for other writers, an attitude endemic to creative writing programs, and, indeed, to literary journals as well.]
I have a stock lament that I often wind up presenting to students in my fiction workshops (though it cannot be easily characterized as inspiring or empowering) that culminates in the complaint that the only venues for fiction (especially long-form fiction) are essentially national. Are you an amateur musician? You can play at an open mic night. You can play at large family gatherings. With even slightly above average talent, you could well play a paying gig somewhere locally. If you’re a visual artist, there are fairs and fleamarkets (if not galleries) where you can share your work with your community.
But local venues for writers are much harder to come by. Open mic nights can work for poets and perhaps writers of short shorts. You can circulate your work to your family and friends, but it is in the nature of reading that even this most intimate audience can feel awfully distant (as compared with the immediate reward of playing a few songs in the living room after Thanksgiving dinner). Really, if you want to be read, you have to be submitting to literary magazines and publishers who are mostly all drawing from a nationwide (if not global) pool of submitters and trying to reach a nationwide (if not global) pool of readers. That’s a very competitive field to wade into. Perhaps the only harder fields to break into are screen and television writing.
[An aside: there are certainly some niche genres that support primarily local or regional audiences, such as certain veins of historical fiction or mysteries (set in your hometown!), and I find writers and publishers who have tapped into that kind of audience rather fascinating.]
This seems a very dispiriting proposition. If you gave an otherwise disinterested person the choice of an art form to learn, there are so many more arts that offer the real possibility of modest but meaningful reward that it’s hard to picture that student selecting writing as the one to learn and practice. And thus my heart breaks a little bit to think of all those adolescent authors putting hours and hours into their NaNoWriMo manuscript, with no outlet for it other than a loving parent here and a generous teacher there.
But maybe I’m wrong. Outside of perhaps a handful of metropolitan environments, I do seriously doubt that local venues for nurturing local would-be novelists will ever be very significant (other than as quid pro quo workshops and writers’ groups — I’ll read your book if you read mine). However, the internet has given us a new version of the “local” scale. You may not be able to sell your novel out of the back of your car at a real world fleamarket (although some people do, or so I’ve heard), but you can post it for free or cheaply to any number of online publishing markets now. I know that fan fiction communities have been vibrant and supportive (and populated with ordinary readers, not just writers willing to read each other) for a couple of decades now. Perhaps other, less genre-bound online writing communities are just as engaged (though I haven’t encountered many).
So I turn the question(s) over to you: Who is your writing for? What venues do you have for your work besides the traditional, national markets? Is there a future in “local” writing, and what does “local” even mean in a digital world?